Ohio Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Ohio Investors

United States > Ohio

Private investment firm. The principals have over 30 years of investment experience focused on a full range of opportunities including technology/software, real estate, media, food, sports and hospitality. We are entrepreneurial and driven to create win-win situations. Seeking investments that are currently established and are looking to fund growth or secure new opportunities via acquisitions or jv's. We look at a range of structures including straight equity, preferred equity, participating debt etc. Quick responses provided on submissions - don't want to waste anyone's time! Tremendous network of seasoned professionals. Principals enjoy taking active advisory roles in subject business.

$25,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Ohio

CEO of a holding company of eCommerce Brands

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > Ohio

Individual investor, married and father of one child, with a bachelor's degree in education and a master's degree in communication, owner of two companies I have more than 10 years in leadership positions in international companies and organizations and I am looking for profitable companies to invest between 5,000 to 100,000 as a silent investor.

$1,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Ohio

I am an individual investor - married, Masters Degree in Accounting and Finance. Interested in angel / silent investing only.

$0 to $20,000

United States > Ohio

I am a physician-scientist (M.D., and Ph.D.), with clinical board certifications in anatomic pathology, neuropathology, and clinical informatics. Through clinical informatics, I have become quite proficient in data science, business intelligence, and machine learning, and am hoping to expand these skills to other areas. I am highly proficient in English, Spanish, and Portuguese languages, and have lived throughout the United States and Europe. I am hoping to meet entrepreneurs with great ideas in which I can work with them to bring my background in science, medicine, and data analytics, to help them develop their business as a partnership.

$0 to $25,000

United States > Ohio

44 years in business, grad degrees from NYU, also from State University of New York, MBA, University of Dayton. Working as SBA CONSULTANT, commercial lender and also operate private Angel Fund. Will assist with funding documentation, business plan development Open to investment activity with successful entrepreneurs. Our recent affiliation with Avalon Capital, to work syndicated loans up to 900M for construction and large capital real estate projects. We work in all 50 states. We work with the largest and best SBA Banks in the USA No advance fees for any funding initiative. We get paid when our client gets funded.

$10,000 to $90,000,000

United States > Ohio

I am a 67 year old retired man, married 47 years. Worked in positions of increasing responsibility in manufacturing for my entire career. Extensive domestic and international experience in all aspects of setting up and running both high volume, repetitive and large capital equipment manufacturing operations. Recently retired from full time work, but looking to stay active and help build manufacturing operations. Located in NE Ohio.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Ohio

Investor in Ohio with proven success in many investments. My day job has been focused on business development and new product development in the medical device industry as well as in the oil and gas space. I have led new product development projects for a little under a decade in the medial device space. This included everything from ideation to launching products in complex markets. I have years of experience presenting new concepts to executives and investors. I worked with large 3rd party design firms , engineers, manufacturing groups, etc to make successful products. I've trained sales teams, distribution partners, support teams, and marketers on new products to ensure successful product launches, strong revenue, and bottom line growth. I have closed many successful real estate deals and owned 3 properties before I turned 30 years old. I am looking for the next investment to devote my time and resources to. I am open to a wide range of markets and business models.

$1,000 to $100,000